Murphy's 130

Reading One Approach to Peer Response, I think Mr. Jaxon had some really good ideas. One of them, being not correcting grammar when reviewing a peer's paper is something I've always felt distracted them fro the content of the assignment, and so I'm glad someone else thought of it too. Some of his other suggestions were really creative too, such as giving a second copy to peer so that you get back two reviews to later incorporate into your second/final draft. The rest was kind of like the standard though, I mean, most of the time I write an essay we are given guiding questions in some way or another, and if not, they are kind obvious.
As for Stedman, can I just say I have enormous respect for anyone who incorporates Max brooks into what is suppose to be school work. Just saying. So aside from that, it was amusing, (Armadillo Drop, Dating SpiderMan?! who comes up with this?) but relatable since I nearly always misuse sources unless I follow a strict guide given previous by a professor. I'm just not very good at listing references. The article helps though.