Murphy's 130

In the reading, Annoying ways people use sources by Kyle D. Stedman I found it very interesting.  First off I wanted to say that I love the way he writes it draws me in and I want to see what he has to say.  I myself find that I run into these issues since I do not read over my work sometimes as a rush to get things over with.  Seeing some of his "fixes," I will try focus on correcting them in the future while I am writing.